Tara Eldana - Making the Switch

1/2 star

Kristin normally considers herself a domme.  However, the man she has the hots for—her best friend’s brother-in-law is also a dom.  She wants him to switch for her, but he also wants her to do the same for him.

This book had potential, but there were so many things wrong with it that I am only giving this a half star.  First, the plot is all over the place.  At one point, Kristin’s birth father enters the picture adding some type of danger to her life, though it is never fully explained and concluded a bit too cleanly (i.e., the “oh it’s no longer there any more so don’t worry”).  Then, the sex is so poorly written that it was painful to read.  A lot of it had to do with the next issue…

Namely, the person who edited it should be fired.  There were quite a few continuity issues (e.g., does she live on the 7th or 10th floor?) that were annoying, but the biggest issue was there were so many basic grammatical errors it is not even funny.  For example, you just do not put the dialogue of two people in the same paragraph.  I could not tell who was speaking half of the time!  I’m not an English teacher but the errors I came across had me cringing, “how the hell did this get through proofreading?”  

There are much better BDSM romances out there.  Avoid this one.

Thank you to NetGalley for the free copy of this book in return for an honest review.